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  • TheQueensofHiatus

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    i just binged all of these chapters. So excited you're writing it again! I love how different this is. Cant wait for the next update!
    October 5th, 2017 at 07:29am
  • vampire_sun

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    I know it has been awhile, but I hope you didn't give up on this story! It was always one of my favorites and I'd love to read more.
    September 21st, 2014 at 08:59pm
  • vampire_sun

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    I'm so happy you updated. I actually really like the fact that there hasn't been any smut in this yet, save for ch. 1. Figuring out this puzzle that is Eva and Zack is far more interesting to me right now. I've a few ideas floating around, but I really want to re-read everything and see if there is more I've missed. And the way you've given us slight insights into Eva are greatly appreciated, by me at least. I prefer a story that doesn't just give everything away in the first chapter and makes me think, but I may be the minority.

    Good luck with the rest of your term papers.
    April 18th, 2014 at 02:41pm
  • Anishinoda1986

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    Owwwww! Nice update!! I can't wait for the next update!!!!
    April 16th, 2014 at 07:46pm
  • Metalwhore

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    Can't wait for more!!!
    April 15th, 2014 at 08:26pm
  • akmo4725

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    Eva and zack are amazing in this chapter....Brian and his flirting I can just picture it! Can't wait to read more of this!!
    April 15th, 2014 at 04:24am
  • xThat Get Up Kid

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    @ Parawhorree!x
    I'm sorry you're confused! I've given some hints, but I prefer subtlety to a hint that hits you like a semi-truck. Don't worry, all will be explained soon.

    And as a person who's been getting chronic migraines for the past seven years of my life, I could tell you that there never necessarily has to be a substantial event that can trigger migraines. It literally all comes down to how your body reacts to different stimulants.
    April 14th, 2014 at 09:39pm
  • Anishinoda1986

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    moooreee!!!!
    March 23rd, 2014 at 11:35pm
  • Parawhorree!x

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    I just don't understand what the big deal is! :S so what if he took her virginity? Why is that such a big issue that causes intense migraines? You havent given any real hints that something happened after she had sex with him, so im comfused.
    March 23rd, 2014 at 03:31am
  • gatorface

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    I love this... so much.
    March 20th, 2014 at 04:23am
  • gatorface

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    I love this... so much.
    March 20th, 2014 at 04:23am
  • secrets-that-die

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    Loving it :)
    March 19th, 2014 at 09:24pm
  • Metalwhore

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    Yup, I definitely like it.
    Update soon!
    March 19th, 2014 at 07:17pm
  • vampire_sun

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    So glad you've updated. I loved this chapter and it's nice to see some resolution in the Zack/Eva relationship. Hopefully now they can move past the awkwardness for good. Looking forward to more :)
    March 19th, 2014 at 06:30pm
  • Metalwhore

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    Love this !
    March 12th, 2014 at 02:04pm
  • secrets-that-die

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    Wonder what's going to happen. Can't wait for more:)
    March 11th, 2014 at 07:37pm
  • revolutionmode

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    totally love it!
    January 22nd, 2014 at 05:31pm
  • HerNameIsAlice

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    I wonder what was going through Zack's mind all those years ago after the sex.
    January 22nd, 2014 at 06:20am
  • raindrxps;

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    I totally like this story, update!
    January 22nd, 2014 at 02:12am
  • Marie Jessica

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    Well I'm pretty stoked about this :) Update soon
    January 21st, 2014 at 04:05am