This was interesting from start to finish! I love your descriptions and how you painted the scene in my head, and I truly got that feeling of sadness from the way he stayed in the shop all day and then spilled to the barista. I love the mystery of it all, too – that ending gave some closure and still leaves me wondering just what happened. You hit a perfect balance between vagueness and specificity where you left a lot the imagination, and that made it really fascinating to read and think about. Awesome job! c:
May 5th, 2014 at 11:46pm