Wow. You've really got a good thing going here, man. Your prologue is fantastic; it takes care of a majority of the exposition without shoving too much information down the readers' throats. The balance of comedy and stands you have going on is very well done. I really appreciate how your main female lead, although she could be part of the model stereotype or that of being related to a famous person, is very independent and real. She has the same emotions and reactions that any other person might have in the stressful situations she experiences, which is really important to I think fan fiction especially. This is great work and I can't wait to see the conclusion!
October 3rd, 2014 at 04:05am