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  • Ailurophile

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    Aristides' behaviour is frustrating. But I guess he want to avoid her even more now, after she confessed that their feelings are mutual. Great chapter, can't wait for the next one :)
    June 27th, 2014 at 03:39pm
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    Oooh secrets are in the air. I wonder what Gaston is hiding.
    May 15th, 2014 at 05:35am
  • CharlieHunnam

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    aww i really like this chapter! it was super sweet and i'm so glad that they kissed!! i'm still very curious about Aristides though. poor guy :( i can understand why she would think like that though.. if/when she goes back, it wouldn't be good to have feelings for him but i have a feeling it's going to be inevitable :/
    April 17th, 2014 at 12:47am
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    Yay, they kissed! Well, this is a complicated situation. I wonder how it's going to turn out.
    April 16th, 2014 at 11:36pm
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    Yay, they kissed! Well, this is a complicated situation. I wonder how it's going to turn out.
    April 16th, 2014 at 11:36pm
  • Ailurophile

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    Aww I loved the last chapter. I want more moments like this between Gemma and Aristides. :)
    April 16th, 2014 at 04:19pm
  • CharlieHunnam

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    i want more of them spending time together. i know it's awkward for them but i don't like them ignoring each other!! update soon, love!
    April 4th, 2014 at 12:06am
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    Love love love!! Mr. Green
    April 3rd, 2014 at 05:57am
  • CharlieHunnam

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    awww! i mean that sucks :( so bad. but i'm glad she was able to distract him a little bit in order to sorta get his mind off of the subject at hand. i definitely can't wait for the next chapter, love!
    March 21st, 2014 at 10:50pm
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    at least he made an effort, although it sucks he didn't say sorry for being a whiny baby. i can't wait to see what you have in store! i wanna know why she's there SO bad :D
    March 14th, 2014 at 05:14am
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    whoa whoa whoa. so like.. they KNOW she's from a different time? well, i mean besides the obvious.. but they know how she got there and everything. that's a wayyy new way of writing this! i guess i assumed she'd just go back and fall for him and then she'd get sent back or something but this is so much cooler! more depth to the plot!! can't wait for more!
    March 5th, 2014 at 11:59pm
  • Ailurophile

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    I wonder why and for what the time lapse chose Gemma. Can't wait for the next update!
    March 4th, 2014 at 11:34pm
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    ah from the start i'm already in love with the character. european history is a class i hope to take, but that's bc i'm a nerd aha. relating to characters is always a double point c:!

    before i go on, i think the banner & the layout contrast really-well! good job (as well as to the banner maker)

    i don't know what to make of this, but i have to state that your words flow greatly with one another & gemma has peeked my interest. her love for this greece history is intriguing & i adore it! i'll definitely be looking into this more. good job!
    February 26th, 2014 at 12:36am
  • Ailurophile

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    I'm really loving this story! :) I think Aristides is being sweet.
    February 25th, 2014 at 09:16pm
  • CharlieHunnam

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    WHOA WHOA WHOA. so wait. where the heck did he come from??? update like RIGHT NOW PLEASE! i need more!
    February 18th, 2014 at 04:15am
  • CharlieHunnam

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    I think her moms worry is justified in the sense she could go WITH someone. Idk who but I get that. On the other hand, using the against her daughter is selfish and a bit childish. She should understand that if she spent her own money on the trip, she really wanted to go. Idk. All kids wanna do something stupid an spontaneous in their life -- let them make their own mistakes.
    February 13th, 2014 at 08:02pm
  • kili the dwarf

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    Totally thought I had commented on this already.

    Well let me just say Trevor is dumb. And that is all...actually I can't wait for the next chapter to be posted. Now that's all =)
    February 11th, 2014 at 04:21am
  • CharlieHunnam

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    he doesn't really seem like he wanted her back or he would've tried more. plus, there's more things than just talking to someone in person. he could've left her presents or sent her flowers or done something extravagant .. he doesn't really want her back. i'm nervous for her to tell her parents, though :/ i feel like they're gonna try to keep her from going and she needs to go! Mr. Reynolds creeps me out. stop it!
    February 9th, 2014 at 07:44pm
  • kili the dwarf

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    I was happy to help you with this! And I think it's really great and lovely.

    I'm excited to see what you have in store for when she arrives in Sparta. Keep up the good work, Anna!
    February 7th, 2014 at 02:34am
  • CharlieHunnam

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    this sounds extremely interesting and i can't wait for more!
    February 7th, 2014 at 02:18am