Oh wow this was so lovely. Like something I'd want to think about at night to help me fall asleep. I know I've given some of my comments to you already, but there is such a beautiful and soft tone in here. I love how you write Loki. It's so precious, but in this gentle sort of way that acknowledges his anger but recognizes that isn't what he's made of. ammgg Thor. Tripping over everything. That's so accurate<3 " A storm was raging in them; a hurricane of massive proportions bellowed through his blue irises begging to defend his brother, ripping apart waves and lightening behind his façade of tranquility towards Loki." This is such a beautiful line. I love when he draws Loki a bath and braids his hair<333 It's just so right for Thor to fuss after and cater to his brother, taking care of him. I really would like more. You know, if you're up to it? I feel like I could read a million chapters of this, and it would just be like soaking in a bath. But then the end is so sharp and exciting. Yes. Need more. Definitely. plz.
ammgg Thor.
" A storm was raging in them; a hurricane of massive proportions bellowed through his blue irises begging to defend his brother, ripping apart waves and lightening behind his façade of tranquility towards Loki."
I really would like more.