Break My Heart - Comments

  • Formaldehyde.

    Formaldehyde. (150)

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    This was good! I liked how you gave just enough information to keep the reader interested but not too much that would bore them etc. You've got a great balance. I love how real the scenario is and the way you've incorporated the word prompt. This actually reminds me of a situation I was in not too long ago, so I can relate to your character!

    Good work!
    February 27th, 2014 at 12:14am