Twelve Feet Deep - Comments

just read this and I've never been more inspired

I was thinking about this story yesterday, about the bathtub scene and bam! You updated! As usual, a superb job. And congrats on getting into Mibba's Magazine!!

damn. i'm ready for more. i'm obsessed with how pete is in this. you're TOTALLY inside his mind and i love it. and you

I loved this, I hope you don't take this offensively but through-out the first chapter I was kind of bored but you picked it up the in second chapter just a little and just kept rocking through the rest of the chapters! The layout is amazing and your writing skill is absolutely fabulous!! Keep up the wonderful work!

?!?!? I love this?!?!
I'm hoping we are in for a rampant and violent deconstruction of the super pixie girl you've created! God I can't wait!
There's something incredibly raw about reading things from Pete's point of view. I can't wait for the next one
(And I would love for you to update believers oh my god yes pls)
Keep it up!!!

@ bedussey
thanks!

@ bona drag
his blog is literally just petewentz.livejournal.com and his even OLDER blog (which isn't his actual blog, but an archive of blog posts he once made that someone posted after he deleted them- I know, it's a little confusing) is heartsleves.blogspot.com

okay i love the name Sloane, it does seem perfect for her. i can't wait to see what pete and her talk about in normal circumstances, lol

(btw, do you have a link to Pete's old blog? i'd love to read it)

I'm so jealous of how amazing your writing is! Seriously. Your phrasing and narration is always just so perfect, I love it. I just love your narration through Pete's perspective, and I'm just so intrigued by this mystery girl. I don't even know how else I could express how amazing this is, seriously. I definitely can't wait to read more (I hope you continue this!) and don't worry-- the fact that it is unfinished will have no effect on my judging it for my contest.

Seriously amazing job on this!

woah, she is taking this whole "manic pixie dream girl" thing to a whole new level! i love it though!

i also really like the comparisons to "futile dreams" you made, very beautiful. i love this story so, so much, ugh

Fuck, stop, I love this so much. That was so heavy and so beautiful and THAT ENDING. I can't even deal. But why was she at Andy's

Another great job on this chapter! Still loving this story all the same and I'm so glad you updated! This Pete is a much more darker Pete than I've read before, he comes from a different angle I think. But still all-in-all the same Pete. I like it.

nice chapter! you better believe if i saw pete just sitting around that i would go to town on that ass, lemme tell you :P

Let me just say this story sounds like it really is coming out of the real Pete wentz's head. The way you interpret things through the word choice fits just perfectly with how I personally imagine a younger Pete wentz would go about doing so. This is already so brilliant, and I have most definitely hit that subscribe button. I will be waiting for you to continue to knock my socks off. Awesome freakin job!!

@ bona drag
you're such a doll <333

and it's funny you should say that, this story is based on a lot of my weird dreams. maybe that's why the dialogue is so disjointed.

anyway you are seriously the best

btw, this is def my new fav story

ugh, im falling in love with this! that roof scene was like it was set in my weird "pete" dreams i have sometimes. i wish i could write more like you, seriously, everything you make is sooooo amazing!

Definitely caught my attention! Excited to see where this goes!

ok im really curious about where this is going! the prologue is so well written, it blows my mind. i can't wait for this start!