July 12th, 2015 at 06:44am
Summary / Layout
The layout is stunning, really. Everything fits together so well. No summary, but just by the title and the author's note, I'm already feeling myself getting ready to well up and that's not an easy thing to make me do.
Content
This was written so...I don't even know what to say. It was so heartfelt and emotional and beautiful, in a way. The way you wrote this was just so raw and absolutely heartbreaking. I think the letter format adds to that -- at points I almost felt uncomfortable reading it, just because of the author's note and the way that you jus poured so much into this. It did feel like intrusion at points, but you countered that with the way that you wrote everything. The description was simple -- I don't think it needed to be any other way because if it were, I'd definitely feel like I was intruding. Emotions were key in this pice and you brought them across wonderfully.
I'm so sorry that you had to go through this. As people have said below, I definitely hope that this piece brought you the closure that you were looking for and for what it's worth, I think that wherever he is and whatever belief system you believe in, he's definitely up there reading this and returning the love.
Concrit
The only things I noticed were a word missing from the sentence None of knew you were in the basement. and a typo in the sentence I’d just lot my father.
Overall
This was breathtaking and I actually have tears in my eyes. That doesn't happen often in writing. It was raw, emotional and in a way, the ending was incredibly sweet and heartfelt. This is a crazy incredible piece of writing.
In regards to an actual mibba related comment; the layout was simple and beautiful. The writing was simple and beautiful. The story was complex and heartwrenching.
I don't know. You made me feel so many emotions. Partially because I'd feel this way no matter who wrote the story, but mostly because its you. My dear sweet Abigail.
I don't know. I love you though.
Don't forget.