It Was Suicide Season - Comments

  • theperfectpirate

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    Abbie...I just...I love you. And I'm so sorry. I never knew. I'll never leave you. This is going to be something that comes to my mind when I want to give up. Knowing that I can't leave you. I can't put you through anything remotely similar to this memory. This awful and painful moment in your life. I love you forever.

    In regards to an actual mibba related comment; the layout was simple and beautiful. The writing was simple and beautiful. The story was complex and heartwrenching.

    I don't know. You made me feel so many emotions. Partially because I'd feel this way no matter who wrote the story, but mostly because its you. My dear sweet Abigail.

    I don't know. I love you though.

    Don't forget.
    July 12th, 2015 at 06:44am
  • nearly witches.

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    Summary / Layout

    The layout is stunning, really. Everything fits together so well. No summary, but just by the title and the author's note, I'm already feeling myself getting ready to well up and that's not an easy thing to make me do.

    Content

    This was written so...I don't even know what to say. It was so heartfelt and emotional and beautiful, in a way. The way you wrote this was just so raw and absolutely heartbreaking. I think the letter format adds to that -- at points I almost felt uncomfortable reading it, just because of the author's note and the way that you jus poured so much into this. It did feel like intrusion at points, but you countered that with the way that you wrote everything. The description was simple -- I don't think it needed to be any other way because if it were, I'd definitely feel like I was intruding. Emotions were key in this pice and you brought them across wonderfully.

    I'm so sorry that you had to go through this. As people have said below, I definitely hope that this piece brought you the closure that you were looking for and for what it's worth, I think that wherever he is and whatever belief system you believe in, he's definitely up there reading this and returning the love.

    Concrit

    The only things I noticed were a word missing from the sentence None of knew you were in the basement. and a typo in the sentence I’d just lot my father.

    Overall

    This was breathtaking and I actually have tears in my eyes. That doesn't happen often in writing. It was raw, emotional and in a way, the ending was incredibly sweet and heartfelt. This is a crazy incredible piece of writing.
    November 14th, 2014 at 12:09pm
  • imnotgoodatusernames

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    I love you, Abigail.
    March 31st, 2014 at 05:56am
  • peach kitten

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    I don't know the words to describe this. It's personal and heartbreaking and for a moment I connected with someone I did not know and all the emotions I felt reading could never match yours. The way you wrote it was beautiful and I really thank you for sharing a part of your life with us. I hope this did bring you the closure you wanted.
    February 22nd, 2014 at 01:52am
  • Goddess of Floyd

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    Okay... not gonna lie, but I'm in tears right now. :'(
    You wrote this so unbelievably well that I can't even begin to describe it. I'm terribly sorry that you've had to experience this, but if this has meant a form of closure for you, then I'm happy.

    I've recommended this. It really is amazing, and heartbreaking.
    February 21st, 2014 at 10:54pm
  • swell

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    When I saw this in your blog I was thinking 'do I really want to read this before I go to bed' but I'm glad this didn't turn out to be the way I expected. Yes, it was beyond heartbreaking and I am sorry you had to go through it, but the way you wrote it - it was sweet, in a way, in the sense that even though what happened was so sad, you were able to convey your emotions in a way that didn't make the reader feel as sad as what we could have. Or at least, what I could have. Does that make sense? Regardless, I think this was beautifully written and like Haylie Jaed said, I hope this gave you the closure you wanted and I hope you're okay.
    February 21st, 2014 at 03:35pm
  • Haylie Jaed

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    I was going to scroll past this, because I'm not in the greatest of places at the moment, but... I don't know. I found myself reading it. And I'm glad that I did, because it reminded me of how brave people can be, and how therapeutic writing can be.

    I'm so sorry that you had to go through this, but thank you so much for being strong enough to share your story. I hope that this gave you the closure you needed. <3
    February 21st, 2014 at 10:31am
  • femme fatale.

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    Goodness ... This ...wow
    February 21st, 2014 at 08:05am