First off, thank you for the nostalgia from this Green Day album, it really made me happy considering how long ago this was and how big of a fan. I love how you incorporated it all within the interior of this story, it was absolutely fascinating! I know from reading other comments that you were already told about spelling mistakes and some other errors, the only thing I can think about adding onto that would be watch how you are doing your paragraphs. Some of them go from being separated to together in really odd intervals and confused me slightly. Other than that, that’s my only critic! Very wonderful job on this and keep up the good work!
March 20th, 2015 at 09:38am