@ mcmeggers No need to thank me! Just keep on updatin'! LOL Really though, this is good stuff. I don't want to seem desparate, but, if you're interested I have a story that I am working on called "Into The Darkness". Its supernatural fiction that involves vampires if you're interested in reading it. I haven't really heard much feedback from it and I am hoping someone will tell me what they think of it so far. I don't really know where I am taking it and would really love some feedback to see if the readers are liking it or not. Let me know if you're interested in reading it!
Wow. I am really loving this story! Kudos on the sex scene, it was perfect and easy to read and most definitely exciting. I really enjoy where this story is going and it gets better and better through all of the chapters. I am looking forward to the next update. Good job!
I fucking love it dude. Your writing has definitely improved!!!! It was good before but now the more descriptive you get, the more amazing the story gets.