I really love this; I like your main character and I like Adam, and the fact that the entire one-shot is both happy and really sad all at once. It's kind of beautiful, actually. Your MC and Justin's relationships to Adam and how his death changed them both and will continue to is haunting. I really thought I'd never actually use that word in a serious context, but here I am. Great job! I also hope that this comment was somewhat decent!! 
March 12th, 2014 at 11:55pm