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HARRY AND ZOLA ARE SO CUTE
I WISH THIS WASNT A SHORT STORY BUT ITS OKAY BECAUSE IT EXISTS THEREFORE I AM HAPPY LOVE U

oh my god Grimmy trying to find her a hobby, i am shaking
also i love how Harry's just grown to know her so well

HOW HAVE I NOT KNOWN ABOUT SO MANY OF YOUR STORIES?! WHAT?????? like, i am just discovering this and Le Chat Noir (which i will read after this) and i just ugh
hoW
also, just a lil tidbit, in ch. 1, you happened to post the first paragraph twice (:
wait
Le Chat Noir is the prequel
goodbye
i will be back in five chapters

OKAY!!...Soooo I was surfing through Tumblr and came across a fic rec, and thought I
should check you out. U Blew me away. I'm so impressed. U are so talented, and Zola and Harry's stories are the only ones I've read so far but I connected with it so strongly that I felt I had 2 create an account just to leave YOU a comment. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Please NEVER stop writing. U have a wonderful gift. I'm so glad I came across your work. #Kisses

I enjoyed this very much =)

i've been in love with you and your writing for a while now, but you're absolutely killing it with this story. it's exquisite and absolutely beautiful and i get all "UGHH FEELS" with every new chapter, because i personally see so much more underneath all the intricate details than just a story with a girl and a boy.

i need to start from the first chapter and work my way up until the third, prepare for an essay yes thanks.

I got that we were both busy, and this was never going to be easy, but there were days when I wondered what we were doing.

i've recently been forced into a long-distance relationship and this hit home so hard for me, along with basically everything else you've described. nothings sucks arse more than being used to being with someone and then you have a cold bed for 80% of the time. yay.

“Don’t, whatever you do, let me push you away,” I murmured, staring at the year inked in the dip above his collarbone.

oh yes, please, shoot me in the head or heart right now. that, up there, along with the whole paragraph of harry wanting to support zola, because she's always strong, too strong, and all about her trying to fit the pieces of finding herself, harry, what's going on with her life etc into the same puzzle, that's just something i'm dealing with literally every day. i don't know if that's exactly what you've applied to zola and harry, but it looks to me like a classic case of strong, independent girl always handling all the shit by herself desperately trying to let go at least some of the control they're usually used to have for the sake of a relationship. such a ridiculously hard thing to do.

and then all that part about how harry wants zola to move in and she's having so many doubts - THIS IS REAL SHIT, MAN. i mean, most of the stories i read are about moving in after three days, because perfect luv rite ehre~~~**, but that's not how real life goes and you portray everything SO WELL and i can see everything happening in real life, because that is how real people with real problems function. i recognize a part of myself in every chapter and i think making the reader identify with the protagonist is the biggest thing any author can do.

i love you for writing this sexy story. i need you to never, ever stop writing. if you actually took your time reading this sexy arse essay, i'll love you even more.

Just read the prequel and these chapters and I'm really loving it!
No way is it too long; and it's enjoyable so it doesn't feel like a bunch of unnecessary stuff.
Keep up the awesome work! Can't wait to read the next one :)

I love this already! As much as I love the prequel!!!

But the chapter is tooooo long. Especially for me who has really short attention span. Usually I can stand only up to 2500++ words per chapter.

But........ the awesomeness of this story is making up for it. I don't mind the length. I JUST WANT MORE HARRY-NESS!!

i'm loving it!