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  • lackadaisicalify

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    I love the IOH references. This chapter felt a little hurried, but now you've just made me excited for the sequel. I hope Angelus has a better life in New York and if Pete returns to her, he better do it right this time :\ (Even though I have a sinking feeling he won't, especially now that Ashlee is in the picture)
    August 19th, 2014 at 06:48pm
  • La Notte Dei Demoni.

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    I liked the ending, and I'm really.looking forward to the sequel. I loved that you didn't over romanticize the last chapter, you kept it open and in a really good place to start the sequel.
    August 19th, 2014 at 10:13am
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    Gotta admit I'm a little disappointed with the last chapter and almost forced sex scene. I thought that when they did it for the first time it would be this really cool, "omg im in love with my best friend i can't believe we're finally doing it" thing. Just thought it would be more meaningful. Also Ang is not the type to let anyone, especially a guy, get away with hurting her. I was just shocked that she so willingly opened her legs for Pete after not really holding him responsible for what he did or make him admit his feelings first. It seemed like she had this pent up desire from him that came out of nowhere that confused me a little. But that note she left him totally showed she still had her spunk left! Can't wait for the sequel and overall enjoyed this story.
    August 19th, 2014 at 07:41am
  • hotmidnightstar

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    Seriously!? That was beyond fucked up. Here I was hoping for Pete to be a stand up guy, and wham! Sequel please!!!!
    August 19th, 2014 at 04:26am
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    okay these tears are real Cry

    my heart feels so heavy from this! i hope in the sequel some good things happen for Angelus!
    August 19th, 2014 at 03:16am
  • lady_enygma

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    5 months?! Pete made no contact for 5 months?! I'd boot him one and tell him he can stick his , well, whatever he has to say up his arse
    August 15th, 2014 at 10:03pm
  • lackadaisicalify

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    yay Pete's back! (and he better have a good reason for ignoring Angelus)
    August 15th, 2014 at 05:59pm
  • La Notte Dei Demoni.

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    I'm really excited to read the sequel now! Can't wait to see where you take this story.
    August 15th, 2014 at 12:13pm
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    I get so excited my you update wow I love this story
    August 15th, 2014 at 11:50am
  • lackadaisicalify

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    Pete, stop being a weirdo about this. and a sequel? yesss
    August 4th, 2014 at 08:02pm
  • lady_enygma

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    Pete needs to stop ignoring her
    August 4th, 2014 at 03:04pm
  • La Notte Dei Demoni.

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    I'm really enjoying this, I would love to read a sequel - your writing is sublime!
    August 4th, 2014 at 01:49pm
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    It was all in the mixing bowl of my mind, never smoothing out the ingredients to make it all better. Nothing great would come from the sadness, pity, anger and love. I just wanted my head to stop revolving and replaying that sad, sad record.

    this is so brilliant.
    August 4th, 2014 at 07:38am
  • lackadaisicalify

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    WOAH I WAS SO NOT EXPECTING THAT WHAT

    Pete's like a nervous little high school boy showing up on the doorstep of the girls he likes, aww. Oh gosh I hope things don't get awkward. I wonder how their long-distance friendship (Is it a relationship now?? uhhhh) will work out while he's on tour, especially with this happening now.
    August 1st, 2014 at 05:08pm
  • lady_enygma

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    Aw yay they kissed! I hope she's not going to freak out now
    August 1st, 2014 at 12:54am
  • milesandmaisy

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    I love this!! not sure if I have ever commented before, but I should have. well done <3
    July 31st, 2014 at 05:42pm
  • AirickuhMeuh

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    on a lighter note "..blonde named Becki. Becki with an I, and I hated her." I laughed too hard for too long..
    July 6th, 2014 at 01:00am
  • punkfiction

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    Whoa, you wrote that scene so freaking well. I could honestly feel everything she was feeling, you captured and described it perfectly.
    July 4th, 2014 at 05:58pm
  • lackadaisicalify

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    Oh gosh, I can't even keep up with all the emotions Angelus must be feeling right now. She's not ready for any of this, but she has plenty of people to help her learn along the way.

    Also, yay, it's a girl! I can't wait to see what she ends up naming her in the next chapter.
    July 1st, 2014 at 05:44pm
  • lady_enygma

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    bless, that mustve been suc a shock, and I think Angelus has reacted very much like anyone would. I hope she begins to pick up soon
    July 1st, 2014 at 03:17pm