Arabella. - Comments

OH MY GOODNESS
HARRY VS ZAYN SOMEONE KILL ME
sorry i haven't been round for 30 decades but pound cake is back
for a day
and then going off the grid again bc school can kiss my ass
but oh nO ARABELLA OMG
HARRY
ZAYN
BBS NO

I really love this story. I wish Harry would stop messing around and realize his feelings for Arabella. Also, Zayn has got to chill.

It's hard to hold my breathe for four chapters th know I'm sorry but i had to breathe it'd be interesting if i was Harry though like it'd be weird But interesting

Bad Harry, trying to deny his feelings for Arabella and poor Arabella. I hope Perrie and Zayne will understand.

I quite enjoyed this chapter. It definitely described a typical 50's teen party. And this story kind of reminds me of the movie, Cry Baby (I watch too much Johnny Depp movies lol).

Anyways you're doing a great job with this story. I can't wait for the next update. :)

Oh my god? The imagery and description in this chapter is so vivid and beautiful! I love you opened this chapter with Harry's little dream about Arabella! Now I'm definitely on love with this story and your writing style. :)

And Arabella's getting a little bold! Her boldness and daring attitude has me wondering what she'll do next.

-Hina

Coming from someone who rarely reads One Direction stories (I'm trying to change that though), I really enjoyed the first chapter. I love how sarcastic Harry is; it makes him twice as funny. The interactions between him and Arabella are cute. Harry losing his tough gut act in front of her is adorable.

I juat got done with the first chapter and I saw no problems. I'll read the next chapter in a bit.

Thanks for the great read. :)

-Hina

The way you've written this is so amazing. Your style is so original, but your plot is also much different from what I've read before as well. I'm so excited to see how this turns out!

aiyaH ARABELLA THAT IS NOT HOW THIS WORKS
U CANNOT KISS HIM AND EXPECT FOR THERE TO BE ZERO CONSEQUENCES smH

i really love your writing style, wow. i've been secretly admiring your work & this is how you get my comment -- demandingly bc i'm shy & dunno how to comment for shit o.o i'm rambling, don't look at me!

so like, wae you write so nicely? the first paragraph is so intoxicating, you have no idea. i love the first pov & immm really picky when it comes down to that style of writing but you get it down perfectly!

HARABELLA
THAT IS ALL
but srsly omfg her last words
she got the last word, for one
she's clearly a badass
aND HAH TO HARRY WHO THINKS HE CAN JUST SHAKE HER HAHAHAHAHAHA no bitch bye

amazing!! update please

Wauw, this is so perfect! I love it <3

i love this story
so perf

Ah, yes, I've never read a chapter where it started out with beef between Harry and Zayn. And also the fact that's set in the 50's is totally awesome since I'm pretty sure I also never read 1D story in the time era.

Definitely captured my attention!
Can't wait for the next the chapter.

omfg
Zayn and Harry angst
fuck my life
AND SHE'S PERRIE'S LITTLE SISTER
I'M GONNA CRY

FUCK

Looks really good!!
I can't wait to see where the story goes!

this looks hella dope
i'm excited dude