Blossoms Who Are Without Equals - Comments

That summary was really epic! It got me kinda excited to read!

Oh, and I don't know much about Fairy Tail so... I may not be able to give a decent comment. Gomen! (I think maybe it'll be my next anime to marathon so I'll be able to get more of this story, though!)

Hana's really cute! It's so endearing that she blushed easily when the boy asked if she needed help! The chemistry between all the characters is really funny and neat and I can just tell how much of a close knit group they are. They're very unique characters! I don't see any major grammatical errors, either! Oh yeah, and like Brittany said, it's so clever of you guys to make her name mean flower and to have her use her magic like that! Kudos to you!

Great start, guys! Keep it up!

Just curious, is the summary from the actual show or did you two make it up? Either way, I think doing that was a great way to draw readers in.

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First chapter is really cute. Reading this chapter really did remind me of watching an actual anime. I could see the chaos in my head, so very comically - might I add. I thought it was hilarious. So far, I really like Hana. I think her power is pretty neat, too, I like that it pretty much correlates with her name.

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Second chapter was really great, too. I'm trying to get a good handle on Kimi's personality. I think it'll be pretty entertaining.

You two keep up the good work. You've gained a subscriber in me.

Very nice start! I love this already, and I can tell it will make a good story. You guys have captured the essence of the characters perfectly!! I can see them clearly in my head, and I love the visualizations you two provided. Also, the background for your story is great!! It's so mystical, and beautiful, just like the Fairy Tail guild! I must say I am impressed with you two's story, and layout. Keep on writing! :)