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Wow! This is fantastic! Your idea is so original! I have never, ever read anything like this on any site.

The idea alone is interesting enough to keep me reading. Building robots that look like One Direction? Yes, please. But you don't make it seem unbelievable. It makes sense--like, it is definitely something that could happen.

Your writing style is a bonus to this great story. You have a very neat kind of style that I absolute love. It lets me read through the story without getting hung up on sentence structures and word spelling.

Also, you've included a lot of other people in this, which just makes it even more brilliant. George Shelley and Perrie, just in the first chapter. And the places you've put Niall, Liam, Louis and Harry in the story are perfect, I think. I can't wait to see where Zayn comes in and who else you write in!

Ah! This whole thing is perfect and I can't wait to see where you take it! :)

I love this so much please update again soon :)

FINALLY an original amazing idea! Already obsessed and wishing for more. Good job, love! Update as soon as you can, I'm itching to see what happens here. xo

Woah, this sounds so interesting! I like how it's all in the future, too.
I can't wait to read more!