Never Tear Us Apart - Comments

I honestly don't know how Helena could continue to stick around Zayn, she's one strong person so Zayn better not screw things up with her again. She's going to be the only one who will be able to help him get through this, hopefully their friendship will only get stronger once Zayn gets his life back on track.

So far I've read the first chapter and I really like how you went in depth with explaining Zayn's alcohol abuse and addiction problems. Sometimes in stories people just title characters as abusing things but never elaborate. I enjoyed the intensity between him and Helena. I could feel her concern for him. Things are off to a great start and I've just recently started taking a liking to 1D and he's one of the ones I favor. The flow of yours words was good and easy to follow. Great job!

I really do like James but I still want Zayn to get his act and his life together, at least James is there to help and talk to Helena. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Now see what happens when you scare Helena, Zayn deserves this and hopefully he would have learnt his lesson now. I can't wait to see what happens with Helena.

Now that's what I call drama, I'm not sure how I feel about James yet.

Ah! So much detail! A new side of Zayn I haven't seen.. I really hope Lena can help him through this :D it's going to be a roller coaster, I can feel it! I can't wait to see what happens(:

Oh this is gonna hurt my heart. Poor Zayn. Stupid Zayn.

I'm ashamed of myself for not reading this sooner. This is really heartbreaking! I love it tho, I really do. I love how Lena's character has a purpose, like a legit purpose, not just some girl he appears to date at the moment. J'adore!

You sure do know how to start off any story with the best chapter ever, I'm glad that Lena told Zayn off and slapped him because he needed it. I can't wait to see where you go with this story, I need to know what's going to happen between Zayn and Lena.

This is an amazing start.

I can't wait to see where this is going. It always breaks my heart to read stories where the band breaks up. I just can't handle it.

Great story. And I'm waiting for more.

This looks very interesting!