Parasite - Comments

So this is great...I'm addicted now and I need an update like right now please!!

I really like where this is going. You write very well and I like your characters. None of your chapters have been filler-y or too dialogue-y. I really enjoy the dialogue and all your details, it's what makes the whole story. Even though you seem discouraged I think you're doing a great job and I subscribed in hopes that you continue it.

@ the_truth_hurts
(I just had to say... I freaking love this comment. If only I was so imaginative in my commenting. And if I received a comment like this on any of my stories, I'd surely be crying. Hahah. It's just too good. Anyway, bravo.)

I'M sorry, is THIS what you call a filler? Erhm, NO thank YOU, if this is what your fillers look like, then I don't know if my tender heart could take a climax chapter. I'd probably die just reading the opening paragraphs and fall over, and the police would have no evidence except the open Mibba page that reads "Parasite" which they of course wouldn't understand because GOD FORBID they peruse the Internet and stumble upon this fantastic website, either way the case would be closed and in forty years some hot shot detective would pull out the cold case and demand for answers...and when he or she finally arrived at your door, you'd simply say, "I warned her. Check chapter seven, it /clearly/ highlights a filler chapter, when in fact she found it to be much more thrilling and valuable to the plot line. Honestly, after that there was really nothing I could do."

And you know why? Because despite my apparently easy-to-shock heart, I intend to CONTINUE reading this death trap of wonderful amazing words and images and oh my gooddddd loki standing behind her Jesus Christ I thought it was going to faint x_x

So that being said... This chapter was cool. I liked the... Verbs, and stuff. Interesting move in the plot to have him take her out in the fields. I am very conservative in my love for this story.

(uhm, NOT.)

Oh my god. Pleasedo not let this lovely story alone, for it is amazing and wonderful and I really CANNOT WAIT for more!! :D

Absolutely loving this story. You write really well and I'm very excited to continue reading. Please update soon! I'm already hooked.
Also, please do the Tom story. I'd definitely read it and I'm sure many others would as well!

oh my goooooddddd I HATE YOU

you can't do this to me

i have a life to live work to do things to see places to be people to meet oh my goooddddd

i never should've clicked that link. never should've started reading. i should've been a grown person and just said to myself, 'hmm. this looks good. too bad i have to not get attached to characters and a plotline, because we know how /that/ goes.' but no. i began reading.

and now i'm hooked.

WELLP I HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY. Now I'm going to be obsessively checking Mibba like a crack addict until you update this. I love Tetra, I love her dearly, and her friendship with Thor is wonderful, and Odin is Odin but you Odin so well, and and and of course THANK GOD Loki is LOKI in this. I respect all my fellow writers who work so hard on their stories, truly, i do, but SO MANY of them are like... "Loki glances at her and gives her a smile. He walks over and charmingly kisses her cheek, though they are only friends. He laughs and turns." Yada yada yada like he is just so happy and carefree and will fall in love like any other character. NOOOO he is not any other character. he is snappy and sassy and sarcastic, he is bitter and hurt and trusts no one. he is loki for a reaaassooonnnn and I LOVEEEE that you capture that in this. truly. i seriously love you, and...well i might as well just admit my addiction now and avoid the twelve steps before it begins.

i am obsessed with this story and you simply MUST continue it. Seriously. (BY THE WAY, the lack of punctuation and capitals is on purpose to show you just how discombobulated you have made me. Congratulations, you killed my inner spell check and smashed my OCD with a hammer.)

-avoids immediate urge to make an extremely cheesy 'hammer' pun due to nature of story-

WELL on that note, my dear, I am going to head out of this comment as it has already spun out of control and destroyed all sense of...sense. Thank you for writing this story and I hope to high heaven that it is updated soon.

Please.

....Please. Update soon.

Thank you! :)))

:)

I really like this so far. Great job!

You have given an interesting intro to the story, and I'm interested in reading more. No doubt the stone is real, and Tetra is going to learn some magik anyway. I hope she goes on a great adventure Update soon!