March 9th, 2014 at 10:09am
I really like this! You subtly wrote in the way they speak in Westeros so nicely and the descriptions added to the feeling that I was there watching Sansa. I found a tiny error: "She held no belief in them after her family was destroy..." (needs to say destroyed). I really liked the thought of someone writing that on the tree, and I felt a sense of hope come the end, which was really nice
And we now have to organise the celebrations for you claiming the throne
This makes me feel her anguish - trying to find something in the castle that her could connect with, that sounds like a really Sansa thing to do, it's beautiful.
I really love that last line though - it made me tear up a little.
Oh, and I am so happy to see a Joff/Sansa story :) Not many of those floating around :)