She Will Remember - Comments

  • Subject A-5

    Subject A-5 (250)

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    I agree with dragon.angel, the way you wrote this makes it sound like one of GRRM's own chapters - it's very refreshing to see this :)

    This makes me feel her anguish - trying to find something in the castle that her could connect with, that sounds like a really Sansa thing to do, it's beautiful.

    I really love that last line though - it made me tear up a little.

    Oh, and I am so happy to see a Joff/Sansa story :) Not many of those floating around :)
    March 9th, 2014 at 10:09am
  • Queen of the Clouds

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    I really like this! You subtly wrote in the way they speak in Westeros so nicely and the descriptions added to the feeling that I was there watching Sansa. I found a tiny error: "She held no belief in them after her family was destroy..." (needs to say destroyed). I really liked the thought of someone writing that on the tree, and I felt a sense of hope come the end, which was really nice Cute

    And we now have to organise the celebrations for you claiming the throne Coffee
    March 9th, 2014 at 04:15am