Our Same Word - Comments

You took a very relatable experience and made it come to life. I like how conflicted she seemed and how it was almost as if she was pleading with him in the beginning but then in the end she was almost telling him to now be sad instead of pleading. I really liked it but I feel like sometimes some sentences shouldn't have been separated when they were, but I do understand how you set it up! But this was really well done :)

This was interesting, I liked the fact that the person is clearly conflicted between two things. I found this relatable and sad.

I only say one minor error of just an uncapitalised "i" I looked in your eyes and in them I saw everything i wanted. that was all I found otherwise this was amazing. :)