Whoo. I get to be the first comment. So I'll try to make it worth while. I do apologize for it taking so long, I had a lot of school chaos going on.
Summary
I like the layout. However, the words are partially invisible unless highlighted. So. I give it a 6/10. Summary is nice. It creates an interest making me want to read the story.
Chapter One
FUCK FACE! (sorry. I havea friend who calls all annoying people that.so its a lovely sight.) Interesting perspective of a Zombie story. Very nice writing style.
Chapter Two
Oh just eat the dog. It'll make you feeeel better. Haha. Crazy little memoryless kid.
Chapter Three
Poor guy, mean old human shooting off his arm. Thats what happens when you become a zombie.
Chapter Four
This human really has it out for our narrator. Poor narrator.
Chapter Five
Awe. Poor Clyde. Such a sad time......
Overall
Really nice story. It is nicely written and a great theory. Sad he had to die though.
I like the layout. However, the words are partially invisible unless highlighted. So. I give it a 6/10. Summary is nice. It creates an interest making me want to read the story.
FUCK FACE! (sorry. I havea friend who calls all annoying people that.so its a lovely sight.) Interesting perspective of a Zombie story. Very nice writing style.
Oh just eat the dog. It'll make you feeeel better. Haha. Crazy little memoryless kid.
Poor guy, mean old human shooting off his arm. Thats what happens when you become a zombie.
This human really has it out for our narrator. Poor narrator.
Awe. Poor Clyde. Such a sad time......
Really nice story. It is nicely written and a great theory. Sad he had to die though.