The Curious Closet Case - Comments

  • fen'harel

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    I take it back, what I said about the cotton candy, carnivals, and bubblegum taste. You can shape the feelings that I get from your words in many different ways and it's beautiful because I've seen you grow and change.

    This makes me think of the color purple in bright and dark hues, dragons, dark shadows contrasting with the bright colors of the walls, and the flavor of grape bubblegum. There are very few authors who make me think of colors, things, and flavors when I read them; you're among those few.

    It's so refreshing to read your writing again. I missed it; I missed your words and stories and this one thugs at my heartstrings with a weird feeling of nostalgia, as if I know what hides in the shadows and I have been deprived from its presence for a while. I'm intrigued about what these two characters are to you, what they represent.

    I also loved how your layout is just plain. I'm used to your beautiful elaborate layouts and, don't get me wrong, I love them. But this, the whiteness, lets me imagine those two creatures interacting while a human sleeps oblivious to the two roommates.

    Obviously recommending and I really hope to start seeing your writing all over mibba again. I miss it.
    June 23rd, 2015 at 07:04am
  • MyVenusDoom

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    I'm intrigued! Your writing voice is lovely. I look forward to reading more. :)
    March 9th, 2015 at 01:36am
  • ThePiesEndure

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    This was very interesting. Personification of emotions come to mind here. Beautifully imagined. :)
    March 18th, 2014 at 06:36am
  • Chairman Meow

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    Oh... this is interesting. Will there be more to this or is this the only chapter? Either way, I love this. Cute
    March 14th, 2014 at 02:17am