January 19th, 2015 at 02:48am
Hello, from comment swap
I have to say, this story is amazing. I haven't come across one like this and I found it very unique. Every thing flowed so smoothly, the story was captivating and the way the words were phrased was beautiful. There were few lines that I just loved, and I liked the way the story was formatted. Good length, good spacing and size of the letters. The descriptions were perfect, characters great and your imagery beautiful. You have a knack for story telling, and I'm glad comment swap brought me here.
Blake xx