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I really like the layout and it fits nicely with the lyrics and the summary you have posted. This oneshot is easy to relate to because all of us have missed someone we used to be together with. I'm eager to see how you'll go about this.
Chapter 1/1: The second paragraph is so honest. When you take someone for granded that's how it usually turns out.
“I don’t want to meet someone new. I want him” The feelings still linger, they are still there making everything harder for us yet we have to prove we are stronger and better than that.
Crying is one of the most common things we do when we miss someone, that's how it always goes, sadly.
He had moved on, and I was wishing I was Stephanie. That's one of the things I did to my self in the past. She's clearly making herself miserable like I did.
I think you could add another paragraph to bring it home you know but other than that, this is perfect. You really made me feel for her, and you even mangaed to make me remember of a past relationship. I was in her shoes once, sadly.
I really like the layout and it fits nicely with the lyrics and the summary you have posted. This oneshot is easy to relate to because all of us have missed someone we used to be together with. I'm eager to see how you'll go about this.
Chapter 1/1:
The second paragraph is so honest. When you take someone for granded that's how it usually turns out.
“I don’t want to meet someone new. I want him”
The feelings still linger, they are still there making everything harder for us yet we have to prove we are stronger and better than that.
Crying is one of the most common things we do when we miss someone, that's how it always goes, sadly.
He had moved on, and I was wishing I was Stephanie.
That's one of the things I did to my self in the past. She's clearly making herself miserable like I did.
I think you could add another paragraph to bring it home you know but other than that, this is perfect. You really made me feel for her, and you even mangaed to make me remember of a past relationship. I was in her shoes once, sadly.
-Maria.