Stealing Glances - Comments

(Read last chapter again, problem solved)

“Make it stop.” She repeated, as Jake looked inside the bathtub to see her phone shattered into pieces.

Duuude <insert broken heart emoji>

JAKE TALKING ABOUT JAMISON: http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mbrnautP5N1r2mgd4.gif

Poor Molly, I adore her, but I think she will feel a bit betrayed when she finds out

I read and forget to comment ugh now I forgot what I was going to say about the last chapter, damn.

*the comment below was already written in my notes

Jamison has so many nice people around her, maybe because she is so nice. It's delightful to read the way she describe the others, makes me want to be the best person I can.

“It’s sad, but that’s all they have is left— stealing glances at each other.” I ABSOLUTELY LOVE WHEN WRITERS USE THE NAME OF THEIR STORIES IN THE MIDDLE OF THEM IT'S LIKE "OMG I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE!!!"

I'm like "aaawn Molly and John"
"aaawn Jake and Jamison" then I'm like "BUT JAE AND JOHN :("
It's being hard to pick a team.

"“I might end up peeing on you by the end of the night cause of the excitement.” He teased, causing Jamison to roll her eyes."
LOL drunk Brendon must be one of the funniest things in the world.

"“I really hate you Jamison.” He mumbled, before drifting off into sleep.""
I'm crying.

Oh snap....why do I get the feeling shit is about to hit the fan?! I dunno but I'm gettin major vibes that something is about to go down...not quite sure what exactly or between who...

Gosh I just love Molly so much so can she PLEASE be clued in to the whole John anf Jamison thing soon? I just really fear what's gonna happen if she finds out by accident over John telling her...I can't help but feel john and Jamison will be having some sort of heated discussion about how they used to be and Molly will overhear it and all hell will break loose...I.could be completely off, but that's what I feel will happen if she isn't clued in.

Once again, thank you for uodating. Filler or not it was always a pleasure. And i cant say It enough how much I dig the sin and song dynamic. I just ship those two so hard. (mostly in a friendship way...but also sort of romantically...) Much love to you :)

Myfeels dude. That last chapter ugh. I gotta keep this comment short since I'm out right now, but we need to get Jam & John together. Like now. Please. I need it. Also it needs to happen before Molly comes on tour. That chick needs to get out of the picture. And soon.
I mean come on Jam could SENSE he was they ctheyre soul mates. Et is have this.

Okay, woah. Hold up, slow down. You updated TWICE within this last week...which made me feel like a jerk for not being able to comment on the update before this because of spotty wi-fi. Well, now that I've returned, THE FEELS. Curse you for making me flip flop between whether I want John/Jae or John/Molly....though, before I get into that I gotta say, I could sense the friend SO MUCH in this chapter...literally felt like I was witnessing her converse/interact with everyone...so...awesome :)

Ok. Well...this update DEFINITELY re-ignited some major john and jamison feels...ugh. but the whole john and Molly "i love you" thing was so cute!!!! I can't deal. How dare you make me second guess which I prefer. Or, and i quote the friend, "im on team YOUR NAME HERE's happiness". So...yeah. thats what ice concluded. I ultimately want the both of them to be happy, but I want them to mend their broken bridges. However I get that in some relationships, in order to be happy and move on, sometimes that means you'll never be on good terms (or the friendship once had) as a result. It sucks, but I'm here for the ride as always.

Much love to you and I can't wait to see where you continue to take this story :) (also plan on checking your new story out later tonight. Expect some love there from me soon. Excited about reading what you've got!)

Poor, poor John. :(

That's really all I can say at the moment.

Well that and that I love this story.

I can not wait for the next update, I always get so excited. I'm curious as to how Molly will react when/if she finds out about Jae and John's "past".

I can not wait for the next update, I always get so excited. I'm curious as to how Molly will react when/if she finds out about Jae and John's "past".

I can not wait for the next update, I always get so excited. I'm curious as to how Molly will react when/if she finds out about Jae and John's "past".

I can not wait for the next update, I always get so excited. I'm curious as to how Molly will react when/if she finds out about Jae and John's "past".

CAN I JUST SAY I AM SO HAPPY WITH THE ENDING TO THE LAST CHAPTER YOU POSTED?!
I finally caught up on the last three updates, and I am so happy with how everything is going, especially Jamison still maintaining a relationship with the boys from The Maine. I have so much to say I'm not too sure where to start or how to organize all my thoughts right now so please bear with me.

Everyone settling into the tour life and bonding has been great and I love reading about the little interactions between characters, Brendon teasing someone, Peter always in the background with a camera, or The Maine's whole photo-op/signing for the girls. It has been a great start to the tour and I can't wait to see what else comes out of it.

So I've noticed there's been a lot less of a relationship-y vibe going on between Jake and Jamison (or is that just me?). Is that something that has been put on the backburner for now to focus on other things, was it unintentional, or...? Because it gives me a lot of hope for a John/Jamison reunion, and I don't want to get my hopes up to have them crushed, lol.
Onto Molly and John though, I can't believe he still hasn't told her, haha! I'm not sure how she would react to him telling her. I mentioned before I think she'd be very understanding about it and she wouldn't freak out or blow it out of proportion, but I definitely think it'd drive a wedge between them in their relationship, whether they're aware of it or not. I do hope he tells her when she comes to visit at the end of the month, even the characters in the story are starting to comment about it, hahaha!

Speaking of the part where The Maine boys bring it up at the end of the chapter, I loved the title incorporation, that's partially why I was so happy with the ending. Whenever authors incorporate the title of their work into the story it either comes off as super corny or poetically placed. You are a part of the latter. I loved the way you added it in using dialogue, it wasn't a comment made narratively, but a comment from a character, and I think that really sold it.
The other reason I was so happy with the ending to this chapter is because it did nothing but fuel my hope for the John/Jamison reunion I so desperately want. (Anytime soon would be too premature and I am perfectly content with the pace of the story and their current relationship standings, so don't let my comments make you feel pressured or anything!)

All in all I am content with the way everything has been going, and I can't wait for the next chapter that contains whatever you were hinting at in the A/N of this one. (:

@ recycledsweaters
Yes! I like where you put at the end what songs where used and things like that. If you made a playlist I'd listen. ❤️❤️❤️

You are a writing goddess oh my lord

this... I swear to god I'm going to die with all these feels...

@ AnnaCherie
I totally have but kinda was like "would anyone even be interested?" Hahaha would you want one?

Have you considered making a playlist for this like on 8tracks?

haha yes. please read that as me announcing my presence. :P haha. KIDDING.

I really don't have anything of "epic" proportions to say as I'm a bit sleep deprived and *gasp* WORKING A REAL 9-5 JOB NOW! (yay adulthood? haha) anyway, I just continue to fall even more in love with this story. and THANK YOU FOR HAVING A PATRICK KIRCH APPRECIATION MOMENT IN THERE. I feel like sometimes he doesn't get enough credit for being as awesome as he is. I really do love that dude.

Haha, oh man, she did tell me the 3 years line. She seemed up to the idea of the show...and based on that three years line I'm DEFINITELY thinking a minimum of three seasons...man. Now I'm wanting this to happen so much...I'll be disappointed if it doesn't. I think all other parties will be accepting enough of the offer ;) haha.

ok, for your question of the day, i actually have a good answer for this!!! I had this conversation with my dad earlier this week actually. (He's quite the music buff himself and is the person who got me into all the greats from the past) Anyway, the band who's videos I always look so forward to are OKGO's. I'm always on the lookout for their stuff; from dance routines on treadmills, Rube Goldberg machines, optical illusions, driving obstacle courses that play the music of the song...whoever their creative person is for their music videos deserves a raise. I'm always so impressed and entertained to see what they come up with. So yeah, their music videos always are so cool to me. :)

much love to you and I hope you're well!!<3

About the V tattoo: ditto @chelsea13

About the V tattoo: ditto @chelsea13