November 24th, 2014 at 02:15am
I wouldn't want to think about my brother being tested in Purgatory instead of finding peace. But...he made his choice.
Wow! She didn't waste any time asking one of the major questions, did she? Can't blame her. I just can't wait until all is revealed. Lol. I'm curious, like a cat! (I'm slightly off my rocker at the moment because I am exhausted.) Anyhoodle, update as soon as you can!
So, I only read the first two chapters of this story, but I really like it so far. I may read on when I have more time to do so! It has a lot of really cool suspense and mystery, and I find the plot idea to be very intriguing as well. I didn't really notice anything to criticize other than, I felt that the thing she said at the end of chapter two was a little unrealistic: it seems to me like a seven year old wouldn't be so naive about things like drugs and death.
Overall, I think this seems like a really good and interesting story. Keep up the good work!