Miles - Comments

I appreciate this so much. You have a great writing style, and it's nice to find a fan fiction that doesn't have Dan and Phil involved with each other. This was simple and sweet. Portrayed the point you wanted. I wouldn't mind reading something more elaborate from you . keep it up!

Going into this, I was worried that I was to be thrust into some unknown fanfiction where I would have to pause and look up characters and history and stuff, but this didn't feel like a fanfiction. You opened it with Dan and who he was, how he was feeling, I saw Dan in my mind's eye, I didn't have to know who he is because you told me. To me, knowing that Dan doesn't like being away from his girl and that even though feeling like he's on top of the wold is a fantastic feeling, he would get dizzy after awhile and how he's insecure about who he is but she doesn't mind it. That was enough. This was really good, the details were amazing. Good job.

I absolutely love this! Excellent job! It was so emotional. You didn't even need to name your female protagonist for me to enjoy the connection and romance. Love love love.