Opia - Comments

I agree with sodapop curtis that this is like a giant thought process and how that makes this story awesome! I love it! Your writing is very beautiful.

So far this story seems like a giant thought process and I love it. Your styles of writing are so uniquely, vividly beautiful that sometimes, especially after certain sentences with combinations of descriptive words I would never think to use, I just have to stop and re-read it over and over again because I just can't get enough of it. I felt like that with these parts specifically:

"I wanted nothing more but to destroy her to the point where we could just combine our broken pieces and mold into one."

"That night, I had a dream that we kissed and he tore the veins out from my wrists, grinning wildly at me, and all I could think when I woke up with one hand between my thighs was that he looked unbelievably beautiful with blood coating his lips."

God, just...fuck. I don't even know what to say. This whole thing is just unconventionally intriguing in a morbid kind of way. The type of writing that can get you addicted to something that only exists in this story's universe. I can't wait to read more.

I found this to be really interesting when I started reading. I love how it's a sort of stream-of-consciousness, but at the same time it makes sense. I don't know if I make sense though honestly, so feel free to not listen to me

Anyway, I don't really know what to say... I like the way you guys are writing this, definitely. It's... well, for lack of a better word: cute. Maybe I overuse the word, but it really is just cute. It's almost like even if there are problems happening with the individual characters, that they're both so caught up in a crush that that's all they think about, and I find that cute.

So over all, great job to both of you! I have subscribed and recommended and now this is a comment, so I feel like I've done a good deed xD I definitely want to read more, though I can't promise anyone actually looks at what I recommend Keep writing, and I'll probably post more comments occasionally as updates happen

...oh. Oh my. I just fell so passionately in love that my chest hurts. Oh wow.

Beautiful style of writing. I like it so far, thanks!