Sinister - Comments

Is that the ending? feels like theres more to it lol.
It's really good, just took some turns that I was not expecting at all lol

This is getting a little dark. Like it was dark before, but now it's even darker

I don't think this is a good idea. If she hasn't been caught yet, she sure as hell will after she's killed another person.

I kind of miss the daily emails telling me that you have updated your story. Oh well... I liked this chapter though. But what is her secret? That she murdered somebody in cold blood and can't risk anyone else finding out?

I kind of miss the daily emails telling me that you have updated your story. Oh well... I liked this chapter though. But what is her secret? That she murdered somebody in cold blood and can't risk anyone else finding out?

Long time a s no update!
This was really good though, thanks for updating.

Oh my! This is intense.

I want to know what happens next.

Oh, this is a great update, and of course, you know I love this. I love how you have developed Charlotte's character.

This was such a good chapter. I love the new detective, and how Charlotte responds to his questions.

This is something. I want to say that I didn't expect that, but then again it's John. He was a bit insane, so I'm not all that shocked. I still think it's really good. I can't wait for more. I love the update.

This is something. I want to say that I didn't expect that, but then again it's John. He was a bit insane, so I'm not all that shocked. I still think it's really good. I can't wait for more. I love the update.

Wow, that was good. I knew John was crazy, but I never thought he was crazy enough to kill himself though. Makes sense. Once the cops find Charlotte, their going to assume it was a double homicide instead of a homicide and a suicide. This was a good update.
I noticed this though: "You truly are a bastard," I yelled over the rain.
I think you meant "You're" or "You are"

I cannot believe she actually shot him! I totally didn't see that coming!

Oh, my! I need more. This is a good cliff-hanger, but I need to know what happens next.

That was way to short of a chapter! I need more!
(Good cliff-hanger though)

That was way to short of a chapter! I need more!
(Good cliff-hanger though)

That was way to short of a chapter! I need more!
(Good cliff-hanger though)

Update soon!! I NEED to know what happened!!

Oh, my! This chapter is intense. I can't wait for the next update. I can't even begin to describe how much I love this.