Forever and Always - Comments

  • I like that you sorta made the lyrics a part of the story. that's new to me.
    really sad story. but kind of a spoiler when you wrote in the sumary that you were not crying. by then I already knew that one of them was gonna die. I guess that's why I didn't really cry too much. you cry a bit more when it comes unexpected.
    April 9th, 2014 at 05:21pm