Wow, I love the way this is written. It reminds me a lot of when I was depressed. I'm also glad that you chose to describe things in a very specific way that gives this narrative a harrowing and nightmarish quality. It would be so easy to write about sadness as "wah wah wah im sad feel bad about me" as I've seen it done countless times before, but I read this and I think to myself, "Yeah, you get it."
June 5th, 2014 at 02:03am