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  • Jordypye

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    This was an interesting start, I'd like to see where you take this, however there were a few typo's in your summary.

    A warrior mkes his way through a dark dungeon to reach the unknown at the center. wil it hold riches or power? mayb a wish.

    Should be:

    A warrior makes his way through a dark dungeon to reach the unknown at the center. Will it hold riches or power? Maybe a wish.

    Cute
    April 17th, 2014 at 05:04am
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