Holding Back - Comments

  • Fuck You Mibba!

    Fuck You Mibba! (135)

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    Ghoul of 2016
    Gender:
    Age:
    92
    Location:
    United States
    This was truly a great story and I absolutely adore it. It showed the true meaning of the virtue you chose. It was what I wanted and I really liked it. Something that got my attention as soon as I finished reading was the fact the I felt their relationship was something real. I've never been in Lacey's situation but I do feel that someone who has been through something like that isn't well ready to jump into something intimate that quick and you managed to describe that in this story which was a major positive point for the story. I love the fact that you chose to write about a biker and Juice from Sons of Anarchy at that. I know you know I love me some bikers! haha xD The layout is beautiful and love the single picture of Juice in that position because it fits perfectly with the title and the whole concept of the virtue of temperance. My favorite part of the story is the part in which he holds her hand and cares for her safety because you describe him as someone caring and sweet even though he is an outlaw biker whom usually get judge by the way they look without knowing that deep inside they might not be who they seem to be.

    In overall this was absolutely amazing and I really enjoyed reading it and liked it very much. Thank you so much for participating and good luck!
    xoxo, RP
    April 20th, 2014 at 02:29am