Update soon please! i love your writing, a lot and you should update more because I am in love with it. Really, I am. I'm looking froward to the next chapter!!
this chapter was so good!! ive been anxiously waiting for u to update and it was well worth the wait!! i hope all of indi's friends continue to push her, so that eventually she will fogure out that she wants and needs help. also, louis is SO in love with Thea, he just doesnt know it. cant wait for the next update, amazing job Rayne!! :)
You my dear are killing me. This story is crazyyyyyyyy... Good it should be published. It's legit to die for. I luvvvv Thea and Louis. So cute but I also hope something good happens with Thea and Daniel there's something there to. I'm waiting anxiously by my phone for the next update please save me soon!! I'm going mental waiting. Your such a good writer I swear. Crazy talented. Keep it up. :) and thanks for sharing this with us.
Ohh work has been killing me, hope it's going good for you. Niall! He's so caring and wonderful! I just love him. Thea definitely surprised Louis with that prank. He just needs to get his thoughts together and ditch Eleanor. She is nothing but trouble. Loved the last two chapters. Update soon.
Ohh shits gonna go down! Love how Louis thinks he's so smart but in the end the girls have outsmarted him. Liam is up to something. Not sure what it is but I really hope he's being sincere and not messing around.
Loved the update. I'll be waiting for the next one. I do understand you're busy. Aren't we all these days? I do hope you find some motivation to write. It's hard when your mind is a million miles away.
Loved it!! like always. I can't wait for the next update!!! I want to know how Louis reacts, especially since it's Thea doing the mischief. Love this story, hope you find motivation and time to write :)
I tried to comment from my phone but I think mibba was being an ass. -__- Anyways :D I freakin love Harry and Caydence! So adorable! I love that the roles were reversed and Caydence won Harry the adorable toothless. I hate Camden and I'm so glad that Harry didn't fight him but instead used words like a mature adult. Ohh and the kiss. It was just perfect! Loved it as always. I'm waiting patiently for the next update. <3
Zayn in a leather jacket should be illegal. Indi needs to tell Louis what's going on. I'm curious. How can she ever expect to be happy if she closes people off? Zayn can make her feel happy if she just let's him. Louis can be trusted. Loved the update. Sorry my comment sucks, I'm dead tired.
Why are they all so frikin' perfect?! Zayn, ahh! -melts my heart how sweat he is and how you describe how his attention like zero's in on one person. ugh! just perfect.