Well, i am enjoying the story, and don't really want to rewrite it. Sorry you find it flat, but i really put this on here for me to share something. this is obviously my first writing so i am still learning. maybe i will take this into consideration next time. it won't be perfect. thank you for commenting though. but don't comment if you are going to act like this is a shit story.
April 26th, 2014 at 08:37am