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  • kyleburns

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    @ xMareBear14x
    Ngl, at first I was really thrown off by the prompt and thought it was really sick. But, then I was sitting on a plane for 5 hours, and was currently stuck on all -15- stories I have sitting in my stories folder. This was the most recent prompt I could think of it, and figured that I could put my own little spin on it. And fun facts with Addyson: this was only suppose to be a drabble about Zack killing the kids. The rest just kind of happened after I couldn't fall asleep on the plane. But, I'm glad you think it's good! :) It makes me very happy!
    April 25th, 2014 at 04:11am
  • xMareBear14x

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    Addyson I love you. I sent the prompt into ATFF and I didn't think anyone would do it, but you did and it's so good!
    April 25th, 2014 at 02:25am
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    @ kyleburns
    The saddest part for me was definitely him murdering Zack though. Or maybe even when John's all hopeful that he'll stay.
    April 25th, 2014 at 01:16am
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    @ brxndneweyes
    Ohhh I see. I'm sure he could've, too. But that's boring.
    April 25th, 2014 at 12:41am
  • fifthghost

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    I HAVE A FIC CALLED YOU ARE MY SUNSHINE / BASED ON THE LYRICS.

    I TEARED UP. I'm sure poor Alex could've gotten out of it somehow. Well, for the murder of his kids, anyways. But... hm. Tough to deal with. Very sad. Vair, vair sad.
    April 24th, 2014 at 11:47pm
  • kyleburns

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    @ brxndneweyes
    Fic twins? I'm so confused...

    I rlly hope you're not crying, I'll feel bad. I didn't think it was that sad, tbh. It was a rushed fic and I had to force myself to not make it too much like Shutter Island. Zack was just fucked in the head. Idk. But, I mean... Alex needed to kill him?! But, yes. John is a little ass hole. I had started a different ending, and maybe I'll write it out. It might have included Flykarth and smut and Alex getting away. Butttttt, idk if I'll continue that.
    April 24th, 2014 at 10:37pm
  • fifthghost

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    ADDYSON. WE'RE FIC TWINS.

    and holy shit no it's still light outside this is not the time for tears. i'm actually kinda more sad that alex murdered zack and told him he hated him?? zack was all crazy in the head and he just wanted to make alex happy and instead he got very much the opposite and it's just sad :(

    but now i'm sad he's been arrested because john
    April 24th, 2014 at 10:02pm
  • kyleburns

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    @ Just_Let_Love_Be_
    I hope this is a good incoherent?? Idk. But that you for reading and commenting regardless. :*
    April 24th, 2014 at 06:46pm
  • Not-Anymore

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    WHAT I
    I AM INCOHERENT
    HOW
    NOOOOOOOOOO
    April 24th, 2014 at 06:41pm