The Girl With the Words - Comments

This piece is short but it is still amazing! Your writing style is just beautiful and I love the way you describe the persona's thoughts and why they write. I agree with Javin, I think a lot of us mibbians could relate to this piece because it just hits home, you know. We write because we want to express ourselves. We look at things that are happening around us and we put them in words, trying to show people how we think and how we feel.

Sometimes, our head is full of unspoken things and the only way we can let our feelings out is through writing. And that's what I think you're trying to convey with this short but perfectly written drabble. And you have the knack for using the perfect words to let the readers feel your writing and it's not easy to do that, especially with something with this length.

Kudos to you!

@ Javin Pilotte

Thank you so much!

I love how you started this off. The simile you began with was absolutely enchanting. I think a lot of the writers on Mibba would be able to connect with this piece because it so beautifully displays the reason why we write, the magic that we find within it, and the many voices that could be expressed through it.

I especially love the concept of carving something beautiful with all of their pain, their sorrow, and their happiness all at the same time! Writers like this word weaver, more than other people, recognize that the ups and downs are all a part of a beautiful life. We embrace pain and sorrow in our writing, in contrast how we avoid suffering in real life, and you delivered this concept well!

This is great!