The Writing World - Comments

  • nearly witches.

    nearly witches. (15250)

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    I love the personification of the websites! It's something I've seen done a few times, but I always find it an amusing and lovely touch to stories about the website itself. I especially like the characteristics that you've attributed to every site - I can see Wattpad being the regal father figure, Mibba being the slightly quieter mother figure and Quizilla is definitely the hyerpactive child. tehe

    I also really like that the 'writing war' is resolved in such a sweet and relatively non-violent way. I'm definitely of the opinion that everyone from other sites should stop arguing because we're all on writing sites to do one simple thing - write. Sure, we have our own preferences but as you said in that wonderful little speech that Mibba made, we're on the sites to share a tiny part of our soul and that's exactly what everyone should focus on.

    This is well-written, and the entirety of the story is fairly sweet. Lovely job!
    June 5th, 2014 at 05:14pm
  • Theo Rossi;

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    I really like the quote in the summary. It's very inspiring especially for writers. The layout is very unique which is a good thing, and I think that is one of the best ways to describe.

    The online writing world was at war... This is a very strong way to open a story, and it really works for this piece. Of course, strong openers for stories are always something that keeps me interested.

    It's unique how you made the websites a person. It's something out there, but it is still believable. I know that is really hard to do, and I think a 'congrats' are in order for doing just that.

    I love the interactions with the three. It's very interesting. Overall, I think this is a very well-written story that is sure to stick out in a good way.
    May 12th, 2014 at 07:59pm