Whispers Unsaid - Comments

I'm already addicted! This is so good! I love your writing. It's so readable and descriptive; I can visualize everything as it happens. I also really enjoyed how you jumped right in and we met Zacky immediately. Naturally, I'm curious about that room!!!!!!! And I can't believe you left this off with a cliffhanger! EVIL! Lol. Update soon

This is really good, your writing style is amazing, and your description really brings everything together... this is the first royal zacky story I've been asked to read, and it really is just a strong story line :) good job!

Ooh, things just got more interesting! I can't believe you ended it there, though!

How is Trinity able to nurse the baby? Unless she had one of her own and that's why she was brought to the castle? Because the King knew his wife wouldn't/couldn't nurse him and there was obviously nobody else who could.

Groundskeeper Johnny. So far I'm not getting any weird vibes from him, though it was only a small interaction. I hope we see more of him soon because there has to be more to him/his story. Trinity had better be careful with baby Nicolas, though. I can only imagine what would happen to her should something happen to him.

I hope this week goes by quickly because I really want to read more.

I love stories with royalty, secrets and darkness lurking beneath Kings and Queens. That forbidden room will probably be something terrible, because I'm pretty sure that the King isn't just the King, going from my hunch.

Unless Trinity just had a child herself, she wouldn't be able to be the child's wet nurse so I'm not sure how you're working that. I could understand her being the child's governess and such but not a wet nurse unless she had a secret child shortly before being brought to the kingdom??

Zack and Stefani definitely suit, going from the short snippets we've seen of them. Hopefully we'll be seeing more of them both.

Hmmm I see some time has passed… And Trinity is feeling lonely, poor girl! But I think she won’t be lonely too long…
Yay! Johnny appears! And he seems friendly enough, at least towards Trinity, to king Zacky though…
Tsk Trinity, you shouldn’t go for adventures on the woods with a baby in your harms… And what exactly have you found??
I really love this story, Stefany, I hope school is going well and you can balance everything!

I really want to know what is in that forbidden room! It has to be something bad for Zack to threaten her life! Curious little kitten here

I love these types of stories so I know I'm going to love this one. Will the others be making an appearance?

The Queen's a real peach, huh?

I'm not all that surprised that she's not nursing the baby herself, seems very beneath her to do something like that. But how can Trinity nurse him? Unless she's going to bottle feed him, of course. Poor girl, ripped away from her home and everything she knows and thrust into a kingdom that has secrets and a grumpy king. I too, am looking forward to her next interaction with King Zachary!

Wow, the Queen sounds so pleasant to be around /sarcasm.

I feel bad for Trinity. I can't imagine what it must be like to be taken from everything you know and thrust into another world, especially since it seems like nobody is willing to help her out and just expects her to miraculously know what to do. And add on that she'll be punished if she's in the wrong place, I'm surprised she left her room at all. Really looking forward to her next encounter with the King, too. He should be nice given that she's caring for his son(though neither patent seems happy they're patents), but he seems a bit all over the place with his emotions, so who knows what to expect.

Oh my lord, woman! You need to update! I know I've said this before, but I flippin love this and can't wait to read the rest.

Love this cant wait for more please update soon xxxxx

Yay, I'm excited to finally start this! One question with the summary: when talking about Trinity, you talk about how she was brought to work for the king, then say ' when the strange girl's body is found in the woods, she thinks the king had something to do with it' (paraphrased). Is the strange girl Trinity or is Trinity the one who thinks the king had something to do with it? I'll leave more of a comment when I'm home tomorrow as I can't stay connected to my brother's wifi for anything.