June Halloweather's Guide to Hollywood - Comments

This is by far one of my favourite stories on Mibba. Ally is so relatable. Your writing style is just so funny and makes her so quirky. I love Ally because she sort of reminds me of myself. Socially awkward with body issues, lol! I can't wait for more updates. I have such a crush on Andrew.

Btw: I started reading your other story Vitalis ;)

Yes, poor awkward Ally. I despair of her ever developing some confidence in herself!

I am really enjoying this so far. You write very well! Ally is quite the interesting character! Sometimes I want to die in embarrassment for her.

HOW does this not have any comments?! :O
I am loving this! Ally/June is such a relatable character, and my god, I found myself nodding along with some of the stuff she said. I'm so glad she's not another cookie-cutter skinny white girl protagonist that seems to run so rampant on Mibba; she has her own unique voice, she's funny and awkward, and I love how her background intertwines with her personality. All of the characters pop off the page and seem so lifelike!
Plus, I love love love the plot itself - I think plenty of writers could relate to it too, wanting fame and praise for your work while not being used to the spotlight. I love that Ally is creative and smart while she uses her pen name to avoid fame at the moment. She's a very well-written and well-rounded character, something that isn't very common nowadays.
Anyways, I love this story to hell and back and I can't wait to read more! I really hope everything works out for Ally but I'm eager to read any mishaps that may happen along the way - you're a fantastic writer!