Trade Baby Blues for Wide-Eyed Browns - Comments

  • Let_it_go

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    I can't handle this.
    I can't handle it at all.
    I'm so glad you posted the sequel, because I can't imagine Patrick sitting there all sad, and Pete being all pale from hospital lights, and poor Anna.
    You're killing me with this writing mannnnnnnnn.
    But it was so good.
    Amazing.
    July 7th, 2014 at 01:49pm
  • lackadaisicalify

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    Holy shit, make me cry my eyes out, why don't you? That was so heartbreaking, poor Patrick Cry He does deserve so much better though...hopefully the sequel will be good to him--good to all of them, actually, because everyone's life is shit right now.

    And thank you so much for the plug again, you're just the sweetest <333
    July 6th, 2014 at 04:51pm
  • milesandmaisy

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    awww...Patrick :( I am here for you! I will take your ring!
    July 6th, 2014 at 02:42pm
  • Flickering Lights

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    @ chynnablueink
    I just read the first chapter :) and no problem :) can't wait for more you are such a good writer :D
    July 6th, 2014 at 01:44pm
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    @ mswrite85
    First of all, I love you for that comment. Second of all, I SO wanted to write the happy ending, but it just wouldn't have been true to life--everything is way too complicated for all of them, and some of the strings need untangling before anything can move forward. I hated ending it that way, though. Thank you for telling me this gave you the feels because that, in turn, gives me the feels. x

    @ star collision.
    Thank you thank you thank you for commenting. I love hearing when people have been affected by the story. Gives me faith in it, y'know? Things would've been soooo smooth if she'd fallen for Patrick first, but she still would've met Pete, and I think the attraction between them would have been inevitable...but both of them need to grow up a little, which I'm hoping we'll see in the sequel. I love you for being invested. Hug x

    @ gailm2343
    I'll check it out!! Thank you!!

    @ TheOnlyBurningCandle
    Oh, it will take a while!! But I hope they all end up happy, too. They have minds of their own, so it's hard for even me to know what's going to happen! Thank you for your comment, you've made my day Mr. Green The first chapter of the sequel went up about 2.5 seconds ago, LOL. Thank you for getting the feels, I love hearing when people are invested in the story. Hug
    July 6th, 2014 at 01:34pm
  • Flickering Lights

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    God, I cannot wait for the first chapter of the sequel. This chapter literally had me all over the place. How your write is amazing and their relationships make it hard for me to chose who I believe Anna should go with. I just hope that in the end they all end up happy... But I have a feeling it may take a small while to get to that.. Mr. Green but keep up the good work and I can't wait for the sequel Very Happy
    July 6th, 2014 at 01:26pm
  • mswrite85

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    @ gailm2343
    haha! glad someone is feeling me in this glass case of emotions! :))
    July 6th, 2014 at 11:37am
  • gailm2343

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    Another good song for Anna and Pete is Poison by Sick Puppies!
    July 6th, 2014 at 08:46am
  • santi santi

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    My stomach is all in knots and I'm sad :(
    July 6th, 2014 at 08:15am
  • gailm2343

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    @ mswrite85
    I'm with ya, bro!
    July 6th, 2014 at 05:32am
  • gailm2343

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    @ mswrite85
    I'm with ya, bro!
    July 6th, 2014 at 05:32am
  • gailm2343

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    @ chynnablueink
    Very Happy I know right!?
    July 6th, 2014 at 05:11am
  • star collision.

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    Chapter by chapter you've been (essentially) ripping out my heart. What a cruel but beautiful way to round off this first part! It's been such a journey but I'm so glad it isn't over yet. There were parts of this chapter that had me wanting to burst into tears or throw my laptop across the other side of the room. Somehow I refrained - but barely. Words cannot express how sorry I feel for Anna, Patrick and Pete. Nothing comes easy for them does it? It's incredibly cruel, the situation they've found themselves in. And Anna being so young and having to deal with such a mess. I sometimes wonder how the story would have gone if she'd just fallen for Patrick first and avoided the tragedy that came with Pete Wentz. A part of my heart is with Anna and Pete together, but they're so alike - maybe even too alike - and have one f those poisonous kinds of relationships. It's like it's dangerous for them to be together but equally dangerous for them to be apart. I'm so conflicted and invested and I feel like I can take every single sentence you right to my heart. Thanks for the plug, you're a star! I'll be watching like a hawk to see when te sequel pops up! Cool
    July 6th, 2014 at 03:55am
  • mswrite85

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    BTW - thank you SO much for plugging my story! That's super rad of you! Love you!!!
    July 6th, 2014 at 03:45am
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    BTW - thank you SO much for plugging my story! That's super rad of you! Love you!!!
    July 6th, 2014 at 03:45am
  • mswrite85

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    GODDAMNIT.

    I just... Wow. I'm like in a ball of emotions and my stomach was turning knots as I read the chapter from beginning to end. Even my dog was whining at me because I was gasping at my laptop. As much as I would have loved to see the super happy ending, I can agree with Anna on this. There is still damage that is unfinished and neither hot nor Patrick, and surely Pete are on the right state of mind. Just... UGHHHHH. Top notch writing.

    I'm gonna go cry now.
    July 6th, 2014 at 03:40am
  • punkfiction

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    @ gailm2343
    Oh my God, that song is perfect for them!
    July 6th, 2014 at 03:36am
  • mswrite85

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    OMG - THE NEW CHAPTER'S UP! I'M ON IT!
    July 6th, 2014 at 03:20am
  • mswrite85

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    I hate the fact that for some reason the ONE night I'm going nuts on catching up on stories and comments that it lags and won't let me post my comment. But here we are.

    I fucking loved this chapter. I love when you write Patrick's point of view since it's so different from Anna and Pete. It's not a refreshing type, but I like to hear how Patrick views both of them in his words. I loved the interaction between him and Stars and I'm excited about the sequel (even though I'm equally as bummed that this story is coming to an end. All good things go that way, I guess.) Can NOT wait for the next installment. I want to see how this goes and ends and all the emotions I'm sure I'm going to be put through!
    July 6th, 2014 at 03:16am
  • gailm2343

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    I know the perfect song for Anna and Pete! Monsters by Sick Puppies
    July 5th, 2014 at 05:20pm