May 24th, 2014 at 05:29am
Wow, this was something I did not expect. I really like this story because it has everything I actually hoped to read. you managed to describe her kindness throughout the entire story and even in her last moment alive she was still kind which is what I wanted to read with either sin or virtue people chose. It definitely had not only a plot twist but also a surprising ending. I did not expected at all that Delilah was a werewolf although I had a suspicion that there was something wrong with her.
I would have love to actually read the sex scene and maybe see a little of more interaction between Dean and her before reading about their kiss and so on but I believe it was very well written. You have a cool writing style and I liked it a lot. Good job and good luck!
I thought about fully writing out the sex scene but I just wasn't feeling it, which disappointed me. I'm really trying to work on that concept of my writing. I really didn't want to post something sloppy for a contest. I really appreciate your opinion. (: