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  • beauxbennettz

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    oh my gosh please please please finish this!!
    April 9th, 2015 at 05:48am
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    @ Thatmom
    Thank you!!! :)
    After I posted this, I was totally doing the same thing, so dont feel bad. Hahaha.
    June 14th, 2014 at 04:21pm
  • Thatmom

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    That was a great chapter!! I wish I could have filled the NHL game with something constructive but all I did was stress eat!!
    June 14th, 2014 at 01:35pm
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    @ umngrrl
    I have realized that she would not be able to post pictures and stuff, but if I was being completely realistic about it, she wouldn't be allowed to be with Brandon at all... and then there wouldn't be a story....
    But, thank you for bringing some things to my attention, I love hearing your opinions, and more importantly thank you for reading! :)
    June 6th, 2014 at 03:30pm
  • umngrrl

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    This is just a personal thing, but the babe thing comes off as super creepy in some instances and like they are taking down to her in others. I also don't know how realistic you are going for this, but she wouldn't be allowed to post pictures with them and tweet about it, they would fire her.
    June 6th, 2014 at 07:23am
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    @ Thatmom
    Very Happy
    June 5th, 2014 at 11:20pm
  • Thatmom

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    :)
    June 2nd, 2014 at 02:53am
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    @ lexwashere22
    I'm just trying to make it read like it would sound, but I understand where you're coming from, and I hope it doesnt keep you from continuing to read it.. Thank you for your feed back. :)
    May 27th, 2014 at 04:43am
  • lexwashere22

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    The only little critique that I could give this is that sometimes you put extra letters on the end of words, like "funnn" besides that it is a really cute story. :)
    May 27th, 2014 at 04:35am
  • lexwashere22

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    The only little critique that I could give this is that sometimes you put extra letters on the end of words, like "funnn" besides that it is a really cute story. :)
    May 27th, 2014 at 04:35am
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    The only little critique that I could give this is that sometimes you put extra letters on the end of words, like "funnn" besides that it is a really cute story. :)
    May 27th, 2014 at 04:35am
  • lexwashere22

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    I really like this story!
    May 27th, 2014 at 04:31am
  • lexwashere22

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    I really like this story!
    May 27th, 2014 at 04:31am
  • nycgirl1996

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    Cute! Keep writing please.
    May 26th, 2014 at 06:35pm
  • maddiecaps

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    I love where this is going. Please continue.
    May 25th, 2014 at 08:04pm
  • Thatmom

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    Great start!!
    May 25th, 2014 at 03:08pm
  • ivylyn

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    This is really good!!! I was left with a smile on my face! Please keep writing!
    May 25th, 2014 at 02:43am
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