The layout is nice without being over the top and the picture is very fitting. I love the contrast between the two characters that you’ve shown in the opening of the first chapter; I think it shows why (in my opinion) they may not be the best people for each other. To me, the relationship between these two people seems very one-sided, which I can relate to. The annoyance of being with someone that is always high is also something I’m quite familiar with. Once again, I have nothing to criticize, this is really good so far and I’m really interested to see what’s in store for the characters 
June 1st, 2014 at 07:14pm