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  • Nisha-Shate

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    @ JustPoly
    I will be posting the first to chapters today to the rewrite. Hope u stay a loyal reader and thanks for your support. I would love to hear your feedback on the rewrite so far.
    January 31st, 2017 at 08:34pm
  • JustPoly

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    Please i want the rewrite ☺
    January 24th, 2017 at 02:33am
  • b3stfriend4lif3

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    One little thing, Chapter 3 starts: 'Monday came slower than Aydian expected. Of course he spent the weekend listening to Aydian badger him about his breakfast with Ashley. As they got ready to leave out Adrian turned to his brother.'
    Should this be: 'Monday came slower than Aydian expected. Of course he spent the weekend listening to Adrian badger him about his breakfast with Ashley. As they got ready to leave Adrian turned to his brother'

    I get that with so many characters, especially having the twins, can cause confusion within writing the story, but it is still a great story !!! :D Plus I can't believe Destiny is getting so annoyed about Ashley and Aydian!
    June 10th, 2014 at 09:29pm
  • b3stfriend4lif3

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    Okay, I said I would comment and here it is: I love this already, In Between Brothers was amazing and now you are beginning to step it up! I love the new character Ashley and I am loving at the little bursts of a little something between Aydian and Ashley! Can't wait to read more !!! Great Writer, great sequel!
    June 9th, 2014 at 07:09pm
  • ivylyn

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    Awe yes!!!!!! I'm totally shipping Aydian and Ashley right now even though nothing has happened lmao
    May 31st, 2014 at 04:00am
  • ivylyn

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    I loved the prequel!!! Kinda upset that she didn't choose Adrian yet. At least, that's who I hope she's chooses!!! Anyway, can't wait for this story to start!
    May 30th, 2014 at 04:48pm