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  • Nisha-Shate

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    @MagdaPaulina
    the slanting is indication that its either a dream or a flashback.
    September 28th, 2014 at 06:29am
  • MagdaPaulina

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    The story is good! But im not a huuge fan of sex xD
    September 28th, 2014 at 06:14am
  • MagdaPaulina

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    The slanting makes it hard to read. Also, who is "Dom."? What do you mean by lickings? You should define that its a dream before it starts.
    September 28th, 2014 at 06:13am
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