This is so heartbreaking. Really, your writing style is incredible. It's very simplistic, you know, like there aren't even any names. But the feelings and the descriptions are very deep and it makes it easy to make an emotional connection to. When she tells him that she loves him and he's just like, "me too", you notice personally for the first time just how really detached he is. Her indecision is also really laid out well and easy to understand; she still loves him, so how could she leave? But at the same time, she knows she isn't loved anymore, and that she should try to move on. It's clearly really hard. This is very well done; great work!
June 1st, 2014 at 12:23am