The "How to Disappear" Game - Comments

@ kahlo
ily omg thnx bae

AH OH MY GOSH DRABBLES
YES
OMG YES YES YES
so happy so excited ya ok here we go buddy pal
CHAPTER ONE: REACTION TIMEEEE (the rest of the reaction will be in your lil blog thingy~)
wow okay um TALK ABOUT GREAT DESCRIPTIONS!?!?!? so excited. Um. Okay girl what are you getting on your knees for? OH MY GOD OH MY GOSH oh. oh dear. NO BABY NO BABY DOLL DON'T DO IT DON'T DO IT OH no
this is not a situation where you can do it for the vine oh my god nOOOOO
oh dear
this is going to be good. very good. ACTUALLY EXTREMELY GOOD OH GOLLY
(now let me finish reading so I can add the rest of my reaction to your blog thing~)

Onto general comments and critiques: there isn't anything I don't like about this so I can't really even say change this or change that because your descriptions are AMAAAAZING and very raw and true which is unfortunately something that most people fail to capture when writing stories of this nature. SO GOOD JOB PAL.

excuse me as I cry over this perfection byeeee

Jesus christ she carved don't eat into his stomach and he's okay with that like no. This is super intense, and super good.

Oh damn I love this already. There's such an obsession here with the eating, just like exactly what an eating disorder is. Except this time, so uniquely, it's shared by two people. Like in the description: Get thin, or die trying. That's really like...wow. The cheekbones thing in the second chapter really stood out to me. Like, the first chapter ends in talking about waking the best friend. And then all of a sudden there's a competition for fasting versus b/p. The little snide catches like, "You should fast with me." when they damn well know that the other can't. Wow is all I can say. This is so powerful and so sad and so. fucking. good.