June 16th, 2014 at 08:55pm
Tales of Online Dating.... Sort Of - Comments
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I absolutely adored this story! I hope it gets a sequel!June 16th, 2014 at 08:17pm
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@ Ladyfiaran
Distractions are good. It's been a long time since I did karaoke so I had to wing that a little.June 2nd, 2014 at 11:17pm -
I read this on my lunch break and I was all LOL, thanks for the distraction. Jamie is so sweet and him and Devon make a cute couple, and Jordie is awesome. And Our Kind of Love by LA is my karaoke song, that or the Eagles Great jobJune 2nd, 2014 at 10:11pm
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@ midnightmssuki
Cupcakes and rainbows and unicorns, damn you Benn and Benn for being adorable. What do they put in the water in Canada or is it all that snow lolJune 2nd, 2014 at 08:16pm -
@ FLSweet82
Thanks!June 2nd, 2014 at 08:05pm -
Loved itJune 2nd, 2014 at 01:27pm
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@ Ovie8
Thank you. Had I been able to pull off a chaptered story like I wanted to, definitely there would have been more on ice/game shenanigans. Maybe one day in a sequel though.June 2nd, 2014 at 12:49pm -
@ Dallas.
Really glad you liked it. I'll be back with these characters sometime.
@ defaultmemory
Thanks. I have a feeling these two are going to rival Ryan and Danni on the cuteness meter.June 2nd, 2014 at 12:47pm -
A+ I think you're on to something here!June 2nd, 2014 at 08:37am
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This is really great! I hope you do decide to explore these relationships in the future :)June 2nd, 2014 at 06:41am
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I really enjoyed this. I thought it was cute, well planned, and funny. I really liked how you set up two relationships in the one story, and made them interconnect and cross paths. The grammar and writing style was flawless, and very easy to read, which I appreciate in a story, and I liked the custom layout, too. I found that it was never too boring, and had a good pace in terms of the action we were seeing. Although I enjoyed it a lot, there is one thing I would have changed about it. I would have made a bit of the story take place on the ice, in the dressing room, or at a game. Other than that, I thought it was great. I'll let you know where your entry ranks as soon as I get the other entries. :)June 2nd, 2014 at 06:07am
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:)June 2nd, 2014 at 04:29am
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@ midnightmssuki The idea was prefect, there's nothing that you needed to worry about.June 2nd, 2014 at 02:53am
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@ NorthernBelle
Thank you! I deal in adorable well from time to time.June 2nd, 2014 at 02:42am -
@ H_DIZZLE
I wasn't feeling great about it but wow, that really makes me feel good so thank you. :)June 2nd, 2014 at 02:40am -
Adorable.June 2nd, 2014 at 02:40am
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That was just brilliant.June 2nd, 2014 at 02:09am
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@ sportsfanatic19
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed.June 1st, 2014 at 11:16pm -
I loved this! It was amazing!June 1st, 2014 at 11:12pm
I really do want to revisit these characters so I'm sure it will happen, one day. PS: love your icon, a lot. :)