Down On the West Coast - Comments

  • Bellamy.

    Bellamy. (100)

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    So the first chapter is short, almost like a quick diary entry but its enough to grab my attention. Obviously, I want to know why your main character has been kicked out.

    The second and third chapters are equally captivating in all of their shortness. It sounds like this would be one of those whirlwind stories that takes me on an adventure. It seems really good within the simplicity of it.
    July 1st, 2014 at 07:45pm